Peer Feedback

Oliver Riches - "I like the title as it can appeal to both genders of the audience buying the magazine due to the pink and blue colours, also the title is bold and has a clear white outline which shows on the background well. Secondly, i like the images on the left side over and under lapping each other i think it looks great and is very effective as it shows the students in the school itself however you should also get some pictures of the school life as it doesn't show very much of what the school is like. You should also put some more information of what's inside the magazine as there is only a few on the magazine. "